I really like the way you said "tears and sweat" as if they were dribbling down the page. The formation of the letters plays as if it is actual tears and sweat. I think you could improve on the layout of the page so it it less all down and possibly some word up and some words down. that way it is not as stretched out.
I really like the way you said "tears and sweat" as if they were dribbling down the page. The formation of the letters plays as if it is actual tears and sweat. I think you could improve on the layout of the page so it it less all down and possibly some word up and some words down. that way it is not as stretched out.
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